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[- My Demon and I -]

VERY Interesting animation!

Blueblowbang, you've really made, what I call: "An unique animation". You have some growing skills, I can see it.
I disagree with the reviewer before me, saying that it was too bad about the voiceacting. Not at all! If there was voiceacting, the "mysterial effect" that this animation has, would go away! In the future episodes, you could put some voices on the characters. The music went great together with the animation. Especially when <spoiler>the girl gets wings.</spoiler>

I'm excited to see, where you wanna go with this story.

I'll add you as one of my favorite authors, so I know when the 2nd episode comes out. ;)

Thumps up.

blueblowbang responds:

Hey! THanks! =]
I also agree with not adding voices on this one
Alot of people's been telling me to add a voice to the guy, or subtitles
But wat i wanted was for the people not to know and for them to guess

thanks for understanding =]

[Snail Away]

I found Nicky!

Really well done! The best is the sound! You've found out, that there always has to be some kind of background noise - otherwise the illusion disappears, cause in real life, there're NEVER total silence. (Then you're dead).

You score big points on your animation of the snail. The eyes and emotions are so great performed! The person (which is a girl, right? Guess it's you) is great animated, especially when she runs.

Oh, and then the little easteregg at the end. Nice little refinement! Guess that's one of your friends, right? Or your sister? Well, no of my concern of course. :)

Overall. Great made, and both thumps up!

Onelani responds:

Thank you!

The person is a girl, who is suppose to be me, but I modeled her after my little sister (who was in the Easter Egg).

[Destroy Sandbag]

Pretty bad!

Okay, I wont flame this, but you really need to practice, and think once more before you start on a flash! I don't even know how this one got the daily 5th.
Okay:

Graphics: Monotome scenes. You reused the same boring scenes over and over again. Work a bit more on the scenery next time. Especially the sky. To pep the scenery up a little, you could've drawn a sun and skies for example. Instead of just a plain green used for the grass, you could've drawn flowers and grass straws.

Sound: What the hell happened to the sound effects? You had very few at the start, and then suddenly there were none. It's not enough to just play a song.

Story: What story? There was no story in this flash. Just a boy that spots sandbag, and then starts to beat him up.
And what the hell happened at the end? We see sandbag brake his backbone, but still he can fight?

Overall, if this is a first-flash for you, it was a good try.
But you need to practice on storytelling, soundeffects and the details on the graphics. ;)

Excited to see your new work.

[4chan 4evar]

I envy you

I really do envy you for your animating skills! I can't understand how you animate so well, but I guess you've practiced a lot, right?

I like it! Thumps up!

[Curly Sam Pwnz All 2]

YEY!

Hahaha!
There we have a proof, that an animation dosn't necessesarily has to have great graphics to be good.

Mate, you really managed to make something HILARIOUS, without spending awfull lot of time on the animation!
You're full of great and funny ideas, and I can't wait to see your next animation!
Oh, and the voice, hilarious! If you're the actor, both thumps up!

Great, but simple work! ;)

[Popstar]

Great f-b-f animation, a bit too short though!

The headline says pretty much everything about the animation. Nice done, nice moves! The ending was a bit wierd. But besides that, great.

Song: So sweet voice! But I guess the voice has been manipulated by a computer, or what?

The only thing I worry about now, is where I can download the song, hehe. ;)

Keep it uP! Both of you!

JamesLee responds:

Yeah, time constraints really plaid a part. We had to keep it under 1 minute for the competition, so we had to cut out longer sections and speed up the audio dramatically. I probably would have prefered to leave it as was, but we're getting some pretty mixed reviews about the voice, it's either loved or hated. Interesting eh? :P
Thanks for your review :)