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VERY Interesting animation!

Blueblowbang, you've really made, what I call: "An unique animation". You have some growing skills, I can see it.
I disagree with the reviewer before me, saying that it was too bad about the voiceacting. Not at all! If there was voiceacting, the "mysterial effect" that this animation has, would go away! In the future episodes, you could put some voices on the characters. The music went great together with the animation. Especially when <spoiler>the girl gets wings.</spoiler>

I'm excited to see, where you wanna go with this story.

I'll add you as one of my favorite authors, so I know when the 2nd episode comes out. ;)

Thumps up.

blueblowbang responds:

Hey! THanks! =]
I also agree with not adding voices on this one
Alot of people's been telling me to add a voice to the guy, or subtitles
But wat i wanted was for the people not to know and for them to guess

thanks for understanding =]

I found Nicky!

Really well done! The best is the sound! You've found out, that there always has to be some kind of background noise - otherwise the illusion disappears, cause in real life, there're NEVER total silence. (Then you're dead).

You score big points on your animation of the snail. The eyes and emotions are so great performed! The person (which is a girl, right? Guess it's you) is great animated, especially when she runs.

Oh, and then the little easteregg at the end. Nice little refinement! Guess that's one of your friends, right? Or your sister? Well, no of my concern of course. :)

Overall. Great made, and both thumps up!

Onelani responds:

Thank you!

The person is a girl, who is suppose to be me, but I modeled her after my little sister (who was in the Easter Egg).

Pretty bad!

Okay, I wont flame this, but you really need to practice, and think once more before you start on a flash! I don't even know how this one got the daily 5th.
Okay:

Graphics: Monotome scenes. You reused the same boring scenes over and over again. Work a bit more on the scenery next time. Especially the sky. To pep the scenery up a little, you could've drawn a sun and skies for example. Instead of just a plain green used for the grass, you could've drawn flowers and grass straws.

Sound: What the hell happened to the sound effects? You had very few at the start, and then suddenly there were none. It's not enough to just play a song.

Story: What story? There was no story in this flash. Just a boy that spots sandbag, and then starts to beat him up.
And what the hell happened at the end? We see sandbag brake his backbone, but still he can fight?

Overall, if this is a first-flash for you, it was a good try.
But you need to practice on storytelling, soundeffects and the details on the graphics. ;)

Excited to see your new work.

Very entertaining!

It was very entertaining!

I just want to know, if you used rotoscoping for the animation? It looks like rotoscoping, but if that's not true, then please take it as a complement! ;)

You really have some GREAT skills in animating anime, if it's not rotoscoping.

The lip-sync was terrific though. Thumps up to that! :)

Overall it was a good submission, but for next time: Choose a better compression for the music. I don't mind downloading 1MB more, to get better quality with no rattles.
Keep it up!

Keveta2 responds:

Well, I have no clue what rotoscoping is :P and about the music.. It's the only compression I know of :(

IMPRESSIVE WORK!

Really impressive work!
First I thought it would be some nice and cozy animation, but then when those "spirits" took over that light-house, it just started to rock.
It took some seconds to getting used to the band, but after a 10 seconds or so, where your brain got "tuned in" on the rocking genre, you got the feeling that this animation really rocks.
The animation lagged a bit though, even on my Core2Duo computer. Next time, think on optimize the animation, so it can run more smoothly!
Overall: I rated a 4 out of 5! ;)

Osuka responds:

Hehehe, well first i was going to use a song like "Draw Me", but was too slow for Sonata, so i used the intro of "Draw Me Instrumental" with the song to contrast the video ^^

Glad You Liked it

This review is really important, i fixed the Main LAG SCENES, but i need to wait that newgrounds update my file

I use a Core2Duo too, and when i tested the movie in my pc doenst lag, but if you do it in newgrounds lags a little :(

Nice beat!!

One thing: Nice beat!

Another thing: Next time, I'd love to see your animation in a bit bigger screensize!
Your animations deserve a bigger screen. Graphics were nice made, the style was cool, especially with that camera bouncing to the beat!
I'll look forward to your next animation!

I envy you

I really do envy you for your animating skills! I can't understand how you animate so well, but I guess you've practiced a lot, right?

I like it! Thumps up!

YEY!

Hahaha!
There we have a proof, that an animation dosn't necessesarily has to have great graphics to be good.

Mate, you really managed to make something HILARIOUS, without spending awfull lot of time on the animation!
You're full of great and funny ideas, and I can't wait to see your next animation!
Oh, and the voice, hilarious! If you're the actor, both thumps up!

Great, but simple work! ;)

Great f-b-f animation, a bit too short though!

The headline says pretty much everything about the animation. Nice done, nice moves! The ending was a bit wierd. But besides that, great.

Song: So sweet voice! But I guess the voice has been manipulated by a computer, or what?

The only thing I worry about now, is where I can download the song, hehe. ;)

Keep it uP! Both of you!

JamesLee responds:

Yeah, time constraints really plaid a part. We had to keep it under 1 minute for the competition, so we had to cut out longer sections and speed up the audio dramatically. I probably would have prefered to leave it as was, but we're getting some pretty mixed reviews about the voice, it's either loved or hated. Interesting eh? :P
Thanks for your review :)

Well.

It was okay.
Far from any of the best I've seen.

The graphics could've used some extra work, and the sound annoyed the crap out me..

The jokes were rather ridiculous.

So overall, extra work needed...

Looking forward to your next animation.

I like the animestyle. I'm a new flash-artist, and I'm practicing animating. I love to review animations, and I'll do my best to give good (and constructive if needed) feedback! (Oh, and I hate madness animations btw.)

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